April 4th, 2005

ouch

constructive criticism

hi, neither of these concepts are fully developed, these are just a couple of original compositions that I need some feedback on. If anyone could let me know how the pages are loading and what needs what etc., I'd greatly appreciate it. I know that not all the links work, and depending on your monitor size there may be some cut off at the bottom or just extra space, etc., those are things I can fix anytime, right now I'm just looking for opinions on design and functionality.
Thanks.
-rachel

www.rachelferro.com/edge/comp1/index.html

www.rachelferro.com/edge/comp2/index.html